{"id":2589,"title":"Solution 1 - Accommodation Problems","advertisement_flag":false,"content":"\n\u003cp\u003eYou live in a room in college which you share with another student. However,there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college.\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003eIn the letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003esay what kind of accommodation you would prefer.\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003e\u003ca href=\"/d/92-1-ielts-writing-task-1-letter-live-room-college-share\" rel=\"nofollow\"\u003eSolution 1\u003c/a\u003e\u003c/p\u003e\n","created_at":"2012-05-16T03:14:33.000Z","author_name":"Bob","tag_groups":["ielts-writing-part-1|IELTS Writing Part 1|false","ielts-writing-part-1-general|IELTS Writing Part 1 General|false","ielts-writing|IELTS Writing|false"],"author_id":1,"slug":"92-1-ielts-writing-task-1-letter-live-room-college-share","parent_id":null,"visits":1783,"likes":1,"image":null}
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[{"id":2590,"title":null,"advertisement_flag":false,"author_id":1,"content":"\n\u003cp\u003eDear Sir/Madam, \u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003eI am writing to complain about my roommate, who is constantly bothering me during my stay in room. \u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003eCurrently, I am living in college room with a student who is not cooperative. As you know, final exams are right ahead and I have not completed my final thesis yet. Every night, his friends gather in the room for fun and frolic. They play cards, watch TV and make a lot of noises. Sometimes, I just ignore this but now he is getting used to it.I have talked to this person so many times but it was all in vain. \u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003eI have also tried to study at other places such as in the library but it only remains open till 5pm. After that time, I have to leave library. I am in miserable conditions because I have no other choices besides changing room or shifting this guy with someone else. \u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003eMost importantly, I got low grades in last semester because I was not able to cover up my whole syllabus. \u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003eI hope you will take action accordingly and provide me a feasible solution as soon as possible. \u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003eYours sincerely, \u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003eJohn Smith\u003c/p\u003e\n","created_at":"2012-05-16T03:14:33.000Z","author_name":"faisi","tag_groups":[],"slug":null,"parent_id":2589,"visits":0,"likes":-1,"image":null},{"id":2592,"title":null,"advertisement_flag":false,"author_id":1,"content":"\n\u003cp\u003eWriting Tips:\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003e\u003ca href=\"/d/how-can-i-improve-my-writing-skills\" rel=\"nofollow\"\u003eHow To Improve Writing Skills\u003c/a\u003e\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003e\u003ca href=\"/d/what-required-ielts-writing\" rel=\"nofollow\"\u003eWhat Is Required In IELTS Writing\u003c/a\u003e\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003e\u003ca href=\"/d/tips-ielts-vocabulary-writing\" rel=\"nofollow\"\u003eTips On IELTS Vocabulary For Writing\u003c/a\u003e\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003e\u003ca href=\"/d/how-your-ielts-essays-are-graded\" rel=\"nofollow\"\u003eHow Your IELTS Essays Are Graded\u003c/a\u003e\u003c/p\u003e\n","created_at":"2012-05-16T05:50:38.000Z","author_name":"Bob","tag_groups":[],"slug":null,"parent_id":2589,"visits":0,"likes":-1,"image":null},{"id":2591,"title":null,"advertisement_flag":false,"author_id":1,"content":"\n\u003cp\u003e\u003cb\u003e\u003ci\u003eCritique\u003c/i\u003e\u003c/b\u003e\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003e+TASK ACHIEVEMENT\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003eYou were not able to achieve the task because you didn't write what kind of accommodation you prefer.\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003e+LEXICAL RESOURCE\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003eVocabulary is quite good but you need to put more effort into improving it. There were many words/phrases you used incorrectly.\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003e+COHERENCE AND COHESION\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003eParagraphs are quite organised. If each paragraph has its own topic sentence, it would be better.\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003e+GRAMMATICAL RANGE AND ACCURACY\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003eCompare to the original writing.\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003ePERSONAL ADVICE: \u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cul\u003e\n\u003cli\u003e\u003cp\u003eMissing article: \"I am living in college room\" -\u0026gt; \"I am living in a college room\" \u003c/p\u003e\u003c/li\u003e\n\u003cli\u003e\u003cp\u003eon head??? \u003c/p\u003e\u003c/li\u003e\n\u003cli\u003e\u003cp\u003e\"They play cards, watch TV and \u003cb\u003emake some noise\u003c/b\u003e\" doesn't sound right. \u003c/p\u003e\u003c/li\u003e\n\u003cli\u003e\u003cp\u003e\"but all in vain\" is not a complete phrase. \u003c/p\u003e\u003c/li\u003e\n\u003cli\u003e\u003cp\u003e\"other places as well e.g. in the library\": you shouldn't use \"e.g.\" as such since it's informal. \u003c/p\u003e\u003c/li\u003e\n\u003cli\u003e\u003cp\u003eYou overused \"as well\". \u003c/p\u003e\u003c/li\u003e\n\u003cli\u003e\u003cp\u003ePlural: \"miserable condition\" -\u0026gt; \"miserable conditions\" \u003c/p\u003e\u003c/li\u003e\n\u003cli\u003e\u003cp\u003eWrong \"I could not able\": \"could\" is a modal verb and \"able\" is an adjective. \u003c/p\u003e\u003c/li\u003e\n\u003cli\u003e\u003cp\u003e\"take a notice of this matter seriously\" sounds very strange. \u003c/p\u003e\u003c/li\u003e\n\u003c/ul\u003e\n","created_at":"2012-05-16T07:55:00.000Z","author_name":"Bob","tag_groups":[],"slug":null,"parent_id":2589,"visits":0,"likes":-1,"image":null}]
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You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However,there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college.
In the letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
I am writing to complain about my roommate, who is constantly bothering me during my stay in room.
Currently, I am living in college room with a student who is not cooperative. As you know, final exams are right ahead and I have not completed my final thesis yet. Every night, his friends gather in the room for fun and frolic. They play cards, watch TV and make a lot of noises. Sometimes, I just ignore this but now he is getting used to it.I have talked to this person so many times but it was all in vain.
I have also tried to study at other places such as in the library but it only remains open till 5pm. After that time, I have to leave library. I am in miserable conditions because I have no other choices besides changing room or shifting this guy with someone else.
Most importantly, I got low grades in last semester because I was not able to cover up my whole syllabus.
I hope you will take action accordingly and provide me a feasible solution as soon as possible.
