{"id":2532,"title":"Solution 2 - Total Value Of Exports From 2000 To 2005","advertisement_flag":false,"content":"\n\u003cp\u003eThe graph below shows the total value of exports and the value of fuel, food and manufactured goods exported by one country from 2000 to 2005.\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003eSummarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003e\u003ca href=\"/d/79-1-ielts-writing-sample-task-1-graph-total-value-exports\" rel=\"nofollow\"\u003eSolution 1\u003c/a\u003e\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003e\u003ca href=\"/d/79-2-ielts-writing-sample-task-1-graph-total-value-exports\" rel=\"nofollow\"\u003eSolution 2\u003c/a\u003e\u003c/p\u003e\n","created_at":"2012-05-15T00:08:08.000Z","author_name":"Bob","tag_groups":["ielts-writing-part-1|IELTS Writing Part 1|false","ielts-writing-part-1-academic|IELTS Writing Part 1 Academic|false","ielts-writing|IELTS Writing|false","ielts-academic-writing|IELTS Academic Writing|false"],"author_id":1,"slug":"79-2-ielts-writing-sample-task-1-graph-total-value-exports","parent_id":null,"visits":1361,"likes":3,"image":"/rails/active_storage/representations/eyJfcmFpbHMiOnsibWVzc2FnZSI6IkJBaHBBcWtDIiwiZXhwIjpudWxsLCJwdXIiOiJibG9iX2lkIn19--ec0a9def04de33484816ebc31557caa10adb86ae/eyJfcmFpbHMiOnsibWVzc2FnZSI6IkJBaDdCam9MY21WemFYcGxTU0lOTVRFd01IZzJNakVHT2daRlZBPT0iLCJleHAiOm51bGwsInB1ciI6InZhcmlhdGlvbiJ9fQ==--03073c48c81b618581157c4a4bd8e0bb47be452b/ielts-writing-task-1-total-value-export-fuel-food.png"}
[{"id":2533,"title":null,"advertisement_flag":false,"author_id":1,"content":"\n\u003cp\u003eThe two graphs provide information about the value of exports of a country in the period between years 2000 and 2005. \u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003eThe first graph shows the total value the country exported, whereas the second graph covers fuel, food and manufactured goods. It can be seen that the total value was shrinking from 2000 to 2002. In 2002, the numbers changed rapidly and the total export value started to grow. The most remarkable point of the graph is the year 2005, because in that year the country exported more than twice the value it exported in 2000. Other facts worth noticing are the amounts of selected good that were exported. We can see that the value of exported food was very stable from 2000 to 2005 - approximately 4 000 million of dollars. The country exported the greatest value of fuel in 2000 and then the numbers were falling steadily until 2005. The value of exported manufactured goods was rising from 2000 to 2002, then falling and then rising again from 2003 to 2005.\u003c/p\u003e\n","created_at":"2012-05-15T00:08:08.000Z","author_name":"KateV","tag_groups":[],"slug":null,"parent_id":2532,"visits":0,"likes":-1,"image":"/rails/active_storage/representations/eyJfcmFpbHMiOnsibWVzc2FnZSI6IkJBaHBBcW9DIiwiZXhwIjpudWxsLCJwdXIiOiJibG9iX2lkIn19--e17d0578fc37364f483d4ae4ccc79610bc4b637b/eyJfcmFpbHMiOnsibWVzc2FnZSI6IkJBaDdCam9MY21WemFYcGxTU0lOTVRFd01IZzJNakVHT2daRlZBPT0iLCJleHAiOm51bGwsInB1ciI6InZhcmlhdGlvbiJ9fQ==--03073c48c81b618581157c4a4bd8e0bb47be452b/ielts-writing-task-1-total-value-export-fuel-food.png"},{"id":2535,"title":null,"advertisement_flag":false,"author_id":1,"content":"\n\u003cp\u003eWriting Tips:\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003e\u003ca href=\"/d/how-can-i-improve-my-writing-skills\" rel=\"nofollow\"\u003eHow To Improve Writing Skills\u003c/a\u003e\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003e\u003ca href=\"/d/what-required-ielts-writing\" rel=\"nofollow\"\u003eWhat Is Required In IELTS Writing\u003c/a\u003e\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003e\u003ca href=\"/d/tips-ielts-vocabulary-writing\" rel=\"nofollow\"\u003eTips On IELTS Vocabulary For Writing\u003c/a\u003e\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003e\u003ca href=\"/d/how-your-ielts-essays-are-graded\" rel=\"nofollow\"\u003eHow Your IELTS Essays Are Graded\u003c/a\u003e\u003c/p\u003e\n","created_at":"2012-05-15T02:45:11.000Z","author_name":"Bob","tag_groups":[],"slug":null,"parent_id":2532,"visits":0,"likes":-1,"image":"/rails/active_storage/representations/eyJfcmFpbHMiOnsibWVzc2FnZSI6IkJBaHBBcXdDIiwiZXhwIjpudWxsLCJwdXIiOiJibG9iX2lkIn19--d943029b3eb17d19856066dbf758fbabeb5dd1eb/eyJfcmFpbHMiOnsibWVzc2FnZSI6IkJBaDdCam9MY21WemFYcGxTU0lOTVRFd01IZzJNakVHT2daRlZBPT0iLCJleHAiOm51bGwsInB1ciI6InZhcmlhdGlvbiJ9fQ==--03073c48c81b618581157c4a4bd8e0bb47be452b/ielts-writing-task-1-total-value-export-fuel-food.png"},{"id":2534,"title":null,"advertisement_flag":false,"author_id":1,"content":"\n\u003cp\u003e\u003cb\u003e\u003ci\u003eCritique\u003c/i\u003e\u003c/b\u003e\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003e+TASK ACHIEVEMENT \u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003eYou were able to achieve the task by describing the trends shown in the 2 graphs.\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003e+LEXICAL RESOURCE\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003eVocabulary is very good and used properly.\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003e+COHERENCE AND COHESION\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003eParagraphs are clearly organised. \u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003e+GRAMMATICAL RANGE AND ACCURACY\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003eCompare to the original writing.\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003ePERSONAL ADVICE: \u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cul\u003e\n\u003cli\u003e\u003cp\u003eYou can remove the comma in this sentence: \"The most remarkable point ... 2005, because in that year\". For example: \"He failed the subject because he was too lazy\" \u003c/p\u003e\u003c/li\u003e\n\u003cli\u003e\u003cp\u003eIf you can just add a short summary your essay would be really great.\u003c/p\u003e\u003c/li\u003e\n\u003c/ul\u003e\n","created_at":"2012-05-15T04:48:07.000Z","author_name":"Bob","tag_groups":[],"slug":null,"parent_id":2532,"visits":0,"likes":-1,"image":"/rails/active_storage/representations/eyJfcmFpbHMiOnsibWVzc2FnZSI6IkJBaHBBcXNDIiwiZXhwIjpudWxsLCJwdXIiOiJibG9iX2lkIn19--7af4eaeafcaa1059015715cc386279bdf48cf02f/eyJfcmFpbHMiOnsibWVzc2FnZSI6IkJBaDdCam9MY21WemFYcGxTU0lOTVRFd01IZzJNakVHT2daRlZBPT0iLCJleHAiOm51bGwsInB1ciI6InZhcmlhdGlvbiJ9fQ==--03073c48c81b618581157c4a4bd8e0bb47be452b/ielts-writing-task-1-total-value-export-fuel-food.png"}]
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