{"id":2088,"title":"Solution 1 - The Development Of The Village Chorleywood","advertisement_flag":false,"content":"\n\u003cp\u003eChorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century. The map below shows the development of the village. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the development of the village.\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003e\u003ca href=\"/d/5-1-the-development-of-the-village-chorleywood\" rel=\"nofollow\"\u003eSolution 1\u003c/a\u003e\u003c/p\u003e\n","created_at":"2011-08-04T07:02:14.000Z","author_name":"Bob","tag_groups":["ielts-writing-part-1|IELTS Writing Part 1|false","ielts-writing-part-1-academic|IELTS Writing Part 1 Academic|false","ielts-writing-diagram-map|IELTS Writing Diagram Map|false","ielts-writing|IELTS Writing|false","ielts-writing-graphs|IELTS Writing Graphs|false","ielts-academic-writing|IELTS Academic Writing|false"],"author_id":1,"slug":"5-1-the-development-of-the-village-chorleywood","parent_id":null,"visits":2379,"likes":1,"image":"/rails/active_storage/representations/eyJfcmFpbHMiOnsibWVzc2FnZSI6IkJBaHBBaklDIiwiZXhwIjpudWxsLCJwdXIiOiJibG9iX2lkIn19--0c81025898615e9fb231bc65282a82a1676a6979/eyJfcmFpbHMiOnsibWVzc2FnZSI6IkJBaDdCam9MY21WemFYcGxTU0lOTVRFd01IZzJNakVHT2daRlZBPT0iLCJleHAiOm51bGwsInB1ciI6InZhcmlhdGlvbiJ9fQ==--03073c48c81b618581157c4a4bd8e0bb47be452b/IELTS-writing-task-1-the-development-of-the-village-chorleywood.jpg"}
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Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the 19th century. The map below shows the development of the village. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the development of the village.
The figure shows how the village Chorleywood was developed between 1868 and 1994. As illustrated, there are four main periods. The first period lasted for 15 years and began in 1868. During that time, there was just a very small group of people living along the main road near Chorleywood Park. In the second period starting from 1883 to 1922, more people started spreading around Chorleywood station with twice the size of the population in the first period. The population was even bigger in the third period which happened after that and continued until 1970. Instead of living around the station, they went to live along the railway opposite to the side of Chorleywood Park. Finally, between 1970 and 1994, the population had reached 10 times larger than it was in the first period. During this 24-year period, there were a huge number of buildings located along the two sides of motorway.
You were able to achieve the task by showing what the development of the village was in each period. You gave a good introduction which didn't repeat the topic/requirement of the essay.
+LEXICAL RESOURCE
Vocabulary is varied: "between ... and ... ", "from ... to ...", "during this 24-year period"
+COHERENCE AND COHESION
The organization is clear and logical. You used a variety of transition words such as "as illustrated", "first period", "second period", "finally"
