Solution 1 - Traditional Music vs. International Music and why we need music
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Author: Bob
Updated Date 28/07/2011 00:10:30
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The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information shown below.
The bar chart shows the various reasons for adults to study. The two largest reasons for adult education are having interest in the subject and gaining qualifications. Each of the two reasons is cited by around 40% of the population surveyed. Next, some people, 22%, also cite that their study is helpful for their jobs. Almost the same percentage of the population believe in the possibility of promotion and enjoy learning processes. Just a few number of people, around 12%, study because they want to change their jobs or to meet people.
The second chart shows the opinions as to how the cost of each course should be divided. 40% of the people cite it should be paid by individuals. A slightly smaller percentage, 35%, of the population says the cost should be supported by employers. The last group, 25%, believes it should be shared among taxpayers.
Outline
+Describe the bar chart
What are the two largest reasons for adults to study
How about others?
+Describe the second chart
Critique
+TASK ACHIEVEMENT
You were able to achieve the task by describing the 2 graphs.
+LEXICAL RESOURCE
Vocabulary is limited. For example, you can replace the word "job" (used in the requirement) by "career"
+COHERENCE AND COHESION
Paragraphs are clear, logical and organized. Good use of transition words: next, almost.
+GRAMMATICAL RANGE AND ACCURACY
No grammar errors noted.