{"id":2122,"title":"Solution 1 - Study Pressure For Young People","advertisement_flag":false,"content":"\n\u003cp\u003eIn some countries young people have little leisure time and are under a lot of pressure to work hard in their studies.\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003eWhat do you think are the causes of this?\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003eWhat solutions can you suggest?\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003e\u003cimg src=\"/resources/upImages/writings/2011/08/IELTS%20Writing%20Study%20Pressure.jpg\" alt=\"IELTS Writing Task 2 Study Pressure\"\u003e\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003eImage credit: suarahatimyra.blogspot.com\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003e\u003ca href=\"/d/12-1-ielts-writing-task-2-study-pressure-for-young-people\" rel=\"nofollow\"\u003eSolution 1\u003c/a\u003e\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003e\u003ca href=\"/d/12-2-ielts-writing-task-2-study-pressure-for-young-people\" rel=\"nofollow\"\u003eSolution 2\u003c/a\u003e\u003c/p\u003e\n","created_at":"2011-08-18T03:01:47.000Z","author_name":"Bob","tag_groups":["ielts-writing-part-2|IELTS Writing Part 2|false","ielts-writing-opinion|IELTS Writing Opinion|false","ielts-writing|IELTS Writing|false","ielts-academic-writing|IELTS Academic Writing|false"],"author_id":1,"slug":"12-1-ielts-writing-task-2-study-pressure-for-young-people","parent_id":null,"visits":1221,"likes":1,"image":null}
[]
[]
ielts-writing-part-2
[{"id":2123,"title":null,"advertisement_flag":false,"author_id":1,"content":"\n\u003cp\u003eAs technologies develop, there are more challenges and requirements that young people have to deal with. It is very common that they find themselves having very little leisure time. From my personal perspective, there are three main causes which are poor education systems, wrong attitudes and lacking of places for entertaining. I’m going to address these issues and then give my personal thought as to what should be done to resolve this problem.\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003eFirstly, many countries tend to have a very heavy education system. In such a country, people have to spend almost eight hours at school every day. After coming back, there are tons of assignments which are supposed to be handed in the day after that. Obviously, they are left with very few choices except studying.\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003eSecondly, without a right attitude, a person could enforce himself to study just to have certificates. Some people might think further education is the only way for them to get employed or to earn their living. However, every human needs to have social relationships and of cause to enjoy his life.\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003eNext, not many countries have good places for entertaining. Without being organised, young people can be trapped into criminal activities. Therefore, every government has to take this into account. They have to organise and start building places for young people to gather and to establish social relationships.\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003eFrom my personal viewpoint, one of the many solutions is to integrate outdoor activities into education systems. In other words, we should let young people have time to enjoy in social activities and to learn new skills that can give them a healthy life.\u003c/p\u003e\n","created_at":"2011-08-18T03:01:47.000Z","author_name":"Bob","tag_groups":[],"slug":null,"parent_id":2122,"visits":0,"likes":-1,"image":null},{"id":2125,"title":null,"advertisement_flag":false,"author_id":1,"content":"\n\u003cp\u003eWriting Tips:\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003e\u003ca href=\"/d/how-can-i-improve-my-writing-skills\" rel=\"nofollow\"\u003eHow To Improve Writing Skills\u003c/a\u003e\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003e\u003ca href=\"/d/what-required-ielts-writing\" rel=\"nofollow\"\u003eWhat Is Required In IELTS Writing\u003c/a\u003e\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003e\u003ca href=\"/d/tips-ielts-vocabulary-writing\" rel=\"nofollow\"\u003eTips On IELTS Vocabulary For Writing\u003c/a\u003e\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003e\u003ca href=\"/d/how-your-ielts-essays-are-graded\" rel=\"nofollow\"\u003eHow Your IELTS Essays Are Graded\u003c/a\u003e\u003c/p\u003e\n","created_at":"2011-08-18T05:47:16.000Z","author_name":"Bob","tag_groups":[],"slug":null,"parent_id":2122,"visits":0,"likes":-1,"image":null},{"id":2124,"title":null,"advertisement_flag":false,"author_id":1,"content":"\n\u003cp\u003e\u003cb\u003e\u003ci\u003eOutline\u003c/i\u003e\u003c/b\u003e\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003e+The advance of technologies and society lead to more demands on students. There are 3 reasons:\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cblockquote\u003e\n\u003cp\u003eHeavy Education System =\u0026gt; not many choices for students \u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003eWrong Attitude =\u0026gt; studying just for certificates \u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003eFew places for entertaining \u003c/p\u003e\n\u003c/blockquote\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003e+My viewpoint is to integrate outdoor activities into education systems\u003c/p\u003e\n","created_at":"2011-08-18T06:37:09.000Z","author_name":"Bob","tag_groups":[],"slug":null,"parent_id":2122,"visits":0,"likes":-1,"image":null}]
[{"id":1680,"name":"Much Details or Many Details","short_content":"My friends used to ask me this question: Which one is correct \"much details\" or \"many details\"?\n ...","likes":2,"slug":"much-details-or-many-details","tag_groups":["english-common-questions|English Common Questions|false","ielts-academic-writing|IELTS Academic Writing|false"],"image":null},{"id":2115,"name":"Solution 1 - Globalisation And Loss of Cultural Identity","short_content":"As mass communication and transport continue to grow, societies are becoming more and more alike leading to a phenomenon known as globalization. Some p ...","likes":8,"slug":"11-1-ielts-writing-task-2-globalisation-and-loss-of-cultural-identity","tag_groups":["ielts-writing-part-2|IELTS Writing Part 2|false","ielts-writing-agree-or-disagree|IELTS Writing Agree Or Disagree|false","ielts-writing|IELTS Writing|false","ielts-academic-writing|IELTS Academic Writing|false"],"image":null},{"id":1682,"name":"Common English Mistake: Everyday and Every Day","short_content":"What is the difference between \"Everyday\" and \"Every day\"?\n ...","likes":3,"slug":"common-english-mistake-everyday-and-every-day","tag_groups":["english-common-questions|English Common Questions|false","ielts-academic-writing|IELTS Academic Writing|false"],"image":null},{"id":1684,"name":"Common English Mistake: In Details Or In Detail","short_content":"Which one is the correct usage: \"In Detail\" or \"In Details\"\n ...","likes":0,"slug":"common-english-mistake-details-or-detail","tag_groups":["english-common-questions|English Common Questions|false","ielts-academic-writing|IELTS Academic Writing|false"],"image":null},{"id":1686,"name":"Difference Between Present and Represent?","short_content":"What is the difference between Present and Represent?\n\nHow can I use them correctly?\n ...","likes":5,"slug":"difference-between-present-and-represent","tag_groups":["english-common-questions|English Common Questions|false","ielts-academic-writing|IELTS Academic Writing|false"],"image":null}]
main-forum
[{"id":70,"slug":"english-skills-listening","name":"English Skills - Listening","post_name":"News For English Skills - Listening"},{"id":72,"slug":"tips-learning-english","name":"Tips For Learning English","post_name":"News For Learning English"},{"id":73,"slug":"english-common-questions","name":"English Common Questions","post_name":"News For English Common Questions"},{"id":75,"slug":"ielts-speaking-part-1-samples","name":"IELTS Speaking Part 1 Samples","post_name":"News For IELTS Speaking Part 1 Samples"},{"id":76,"slug":"ielts-speaking-part-2-3-samples","name":"IELTS Speaking Part 2 \u0026 3 Samples","post_name":"News For IELTS Speaking Part 2 \u0026 3 Samples"},{"id":77,"slug":"ielts-speaking-samples-and-answers","name":"IELTS Speaking Samples And Answers","post_name":"News For IELTS Speaking Samples And Answers"},{"id":68,"slug":"ielts-listening-part-1","name":"IELTS Listening Part 1","post_name":"News For IELTS Listening Part 1"},{"id":74,"slug":"ielts-speaking-samples","name":"IELTS Speaking Samples","post_name":"News For IELTS Speaking Samples"},{"id":78,"slug":"english-skills-speaking-partner","name":"English Skills - Speaking Partner","post_name":"News For English Skills - Speaking Partner"},{"id":81,"slug":"ielts-writing-part-1-general","name":"IELTS Writing Part 1 General","post_name":"News For IELTS Writing Part 1 General"},{"id":83,"slug":"ielts-writing-agree-or-disagree","name":"IELTS Writing Agree Or Disagree","post_name":"News For IELTS Writing Agree Or Disagree"},{"id":84,"slug":"ielts-writing-discuss-and-give-opinion","name":"IELTS Writing Discuss And Give Opinion","post_name":"News For IELTS Writing Discuss And Give Opinion"},{"id":85,"slug":"ielts-writing-opinion","name":"IELTS Writing Opinion","post_name":"News For IELTS Writing Opinion"},{"id":82,"slug":"ielts-writing-part-1-academic","name":"IELTS Writing Part 1 Academic","post_name":"News For IELTS Writing Part 1 Academic"},{"id":86,"slug":"ielts-writing-diagram-process","name":"IELTS Writing Diagram Process","post_name":"News For IELTS Writing Diagram Process"},{"id":87,"slug":"ielts-writing-diagram-map","name":"IELTS Writing Diagram Map","post_name":"News For IELTS Writing Diagram Map"},{"id":88,"slug":"ielts-writing-diagram-bar-chart","name":"IELTS Writing Diagram Bar Chart","post_name":"News For IELTS Writing Diagram Bar Chart"},{"id":89,"slug":"ielts-writing-advantages-disadvantages","name":"IELTS Writing Advantages Disadvantages","post_name":"News For IELTS Writing Advantages Disadvantages"},{"id":90,"slug":"ielts-writing","name":"IELTS Writing","post_name":"IELTS Writing News"},{"id":91,"slug":"ielts-listening","name":"IELTS Listening","post_name":"IELTS Listening News"},{"id":79,"slug":"ielts-writing-part-1","name":"IELTS Writing Part 1","post_name":"News For IELTS Writing Part 1"},{"id":69,"slug":"ielts-listening-part-2","name":"IELTS Listening Part 2","post_name":"News For IELTS Listening Part 2"},{"id":80,"slug":"ielts-writing-part-2","name":"IELTS Writing Part 2","post_name":"News For IELTS Writing Part 2"},{"id":92,"slug":"ielts-writing-graphs","name":"IELTS Writing Graphs","post_name":"News For IELTS Writing Graphs"},{"id":93,"slug":"ielts-academic-writing","name":"IELTS Academic Writing","post_name":"News For IELTS Academic Writing"}]
As technologies develop, there are more challenges and requirements that young people have to deal with. It is very common that they find themselves having very little leisure time. From my personal perspective, there are three main causes which are poor education systems, wrong attitudes and lacking of places for entertaining. I’m going to address these issues and then give my personal thought as to what should be done to resolve this problem.
Firstly, many countries tend to have a very heavy education system. In such a country, people have to spend almost eight hours at school every day. After coming back, there are tons of assignments which are supposed to be handed in the day after that. Obviously, they are left with very few choices except studying.
Secondly, without a right attitude, a person could enforce himself to study just to have certificates. Some people might think further education is the only way for them to get employed or to earn their living. However, every human needs to have social relationships and of cause to enjoy his life.
Next, not many countries have good places for entertaining. Without being organised, young people can be trapped into criminal activities. Therefore, every government has to take this into account. They have to organise and start building places for young people to gather and to establish social relationships.
From my personal viewpoint, one of the many solutions is to integrate outdoor activities into education systems. In other words, we should let young people have time to enjoy in social activities and to learn new skills that can give them a healthy life.
