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The bar chart below shows the results of a survey conducted by a personnel department at a major company. The survey was carried out on two groups of workers: those aged from 18-30 and those aged 45-60, and shows factors affecting their work performance.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The bar chart shows various factors that have impacts on work performance of two different age groups 18-30 and 45-60.
Money seemed to have the same effect on the two age groups which contributed around 70% of work performance. Likewise, 60% of work performance can be achieved through team spirit on both the young age group and the middle age group. Surprisingly, work environment contributed as few as 30% on both groups. Next, chance for personal development seemed to be significantly important for the group of people aged 18-30; whereas for the middle age group, it contributed only half of the work performance of the young age group with 40%. Similarly, young people surveyed had a higher level of work performance in a relaxed working environment but this didn't improve much the work performance of the middle aged people. Having competent managers played a fairly important role in improving the work performance of both of the two age groups with 50%.
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