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IELTS Writing Sample

Children Spending Too Much Time On Computers

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Some people are concerned that children spend too much time on computers - playing games, chatting and watching videos. But all this time is actually good preparation for children, who will have to spend many hours working on computers throughout their education and working lives.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

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Computers are know commonplace in every home. In fact, most households in the modern world contain 2 or even more . The newer generations have grown up with these instruments and using them is second nature to them. So much so that they are increasingly spending more and more time online than they do in the real world. Although this might seem as a unnatural habit, some have even called it an addiction, but there are many benefits to use of computers which although might not be obvious at first will greatly shape the way young people are being brought up.

To a person having no interaction with modern technology it might seem like a time-sink. Internet chatting and instant messaging applications have always been the first culprit, ignoring the fact that these chatting applications can open one's eyes to the world.They provide a platform for people of different nationalities and backgrounds to meet together, allowing our youth to explore other cultures , gaining a new prespective on life and understanding our world better.

Video games are another form of misunderstood technology. Computer games are an extremely effective educational medium which teaches it's audience new skills in an intuitive and seamless manner. A great example would be math learning games. They combine all the enjoyable and addictive aspects of video games with a rigorous mental math curriculum and as the player gradually progresses through the game he is taught to calculate increasing difficult algebra and math equations without using pen and paper and in a limited time. This is one of countless other examples that show that a personal computer can be an effective educational medium.

Computer, mobile phones and tablets are all relatively new. We have not fully grasped what can be achieved by these devices and being worried that children are spending too much time on these devices is a natural reaction. However, we must realise that there are a lot of benefits that can be reaped from this new innovation and we need not be concerned about it's use by our children.

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IELTS Writing Sample

Mandatory Financial Education

IELTS Writing Sample - Task 2

Financial education should be mandatory component of the school program. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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IELTS Writing Word Count and IELTS Writing Time

IELTS Writing Task 1:
Timing: 20 minutes
Minimum word count: 150

IELTS Writing Task 2:
Timing: 40 minutes
Minimum word count: 250

IELTS Writing Sample - Task 1

There are 2 different formats. One is for the Academic module and the other is for the General module. However, for both modules, you will have to produce a writing of 150 words based on the given information.
IELTS Writing Task 1 - General Module
You are supposed to write a letter.
IELTS Writing Task 1 - Academic Module
You will be given a task based on some pictorial or graphic information. You have to describe the information provided.
For More Details: IELTS Writing Task 1

IELTS Writing Sample - Task 2

This task is more difficult than IELTS Writing Task 1
You have to write at least 250 words and, as Task 2 is longer than Task 1, you are advised to spend approximately 40 minutes on this task and 20 minutes on the first task.
You are expected to produce a writing on a given topic and to organise your answer correctly, giving some examples to support your ideas.
For More Details: IELTS Writing Task 2

Give your writing a good structure

1) Introduction is a must. You don't believe you could get a good grade without introduction, do you?

2) Body: 3 paragraphs are also necessary. Three is a magical number. It can do wonders to your overall band score.

3) Conclusion. You do not want to infuse your examiner with a feeling of incompleteness.

A Good Outline before you write is essential

What you are going to write in your essay? Write down the key ideas as short as possible.

An outline sample
Introduction - Topic and opinion in short
Paragraph 1 - staff working conditions are important
Paragraph 2 - employers should research and improve the working conditions
Paragraph 3 - concentrating more on their product is bad
Conclusion - Short summary of paragraphs

How will your essay look like?

Is it everything?

No, the structure you have just seen is a structure for an opinion essay.

What does it mean?

It means there are many different types of essays. If you go through our website, you can see that under IELTS Writing Task 1 and Task 2, there are different categories.
You need to go through each of them and study the structure for the particular writing type.

I do know the structure of an IELTS Writing but why I didn't score high in the exam?

There are many reasons. One of the many reasons is lacking of linking words.
Did you use linking words?
They would make your structure clearer and therefore improve your overal score.

Linking Words or Transitional Words

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This is how your essay is graded

There are 4 components: Task Response, Coherence and Cohesion, Lexical Resource, Grammatical Range and Accuracy.

Task Response means to what extend your essay covers the topic. For example, if the topic is "The advantages and disadvantages of globalization", you would have to write about both aspects not just only advantages or just only disadvantages.

Coherence and Cohesion means how well your paragraphs and sentences are connected. If your first paragraph is about advantages of globalisation, you should start your second paragraph with phrases such as "Despite the advantages, there are many disadvantages we should be aware of". Otherwise, your essay is just a list of items which are not related to each other.

Lexical Resource means vocabulary and different types of sentences, simple and complex. You should be able to demonstrate your capability in using English.

Grammatical Range and Accuracy means spelling and grammar of sentences. You should be able to spell the words correctly, do not forget articles “a” and “the”, punctuations is also important.

One more important thing to know: the four criteria are equally weighted. It means that if you forgot about “Coherence and Cohesion” in your essay, you will loose 1/4 of your essay points.