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Your local museum has asked for feedback on your recent visit. Write to museum
a) Tell them what you liked and what you didn't like
b) Make some suggestions for improvement
c) Describe some other exhibits you would like to see
How many words? How long?
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I am glad that your museum is so eager to collect the feedback and work on improving things. It was one of the most insightful visits that I have ever had in the recent past. To be precise, I liked your science and technology division that displayed how cars are made, how exactly cameras function etc. I also liked the history division that still maintains the letters written by Mahatma Gandhi. On the otherhand, the ambience could have been much better as the place was quite dirty and letters, cars, cameras and other tools were accumulated with dust.
To improve things further, I reckon you have to hire some professionals who know the subject well because the person who was explaining things to us, was not very clear and succinct. I also saw people touching and fiddling some of the gadgets that should be prevented.
As is, your museum can provide great experience and plethora of information and knowledge. To add to this, if you could provide some more information on other gigantic and flabbergasting inventions such as aircrafts, jets, fighter planes etc, it will be great. Also to complement, you can add some information that will provide more clarity on local historical subjects.