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{"id":2111,"title":"Solution 1 - Should Parents Be Obliged To Immunise Their Children","advertisement_flag":false,"content":"\n\u003cp\u003eShould parents be obliged to immunise their children against childhood diseases?\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003eOr do individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children?\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003e\u003ca href=\"/d/10-1-ielts-writing-task-2-should-parents-be-obliged-to-immunise-their-children\" rel=\"nofollow\"\u003eSolution 1\u003c/a\u003e\u003c/p\u003e\n","created_at":"2011-08-12T10:36:30.000Z","author_name":"Bob","tag_groups":["ielts-writing-part-2|IELTS Writing Part 2|false","ielts-writing-opinion|IELTS Writing Opinion|false","ielts-writing|IELTS Writing|false","ielts-academic-writing|IELTS Academic Writing|false"],"author_id":1,"slug":"10-1-ielts-writing-task-2-should-parents-be-obliged-to-immunise-their-children","parent_id":null,"visits":5051,"likes":5,"image":null}
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[{"id":2112,"title":null,"advertisement_flag":false,"author_id":1,"content":"\n\u003cp\u003eChildhood diseases can become very serious if not treated properly. In many poor countries, the number of children who die because of ailments is very high. Hence, it should be an obligation for parents to immunise their children against childhood diseases. In this paper, I’m going to discuss the reasons for which immunisation programs must be enforced.\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003eFirst of all, as can be seen, children in many poor countries are so easy to get infected due to the poor healthcare system. In such countries, the number of children dying because of childhood diseases is alarmingly high. Another possible reason is that parents do not take children protection into account well enough. They have to worry much about earning money and how to survive. Hence, to protect them, parents should be obliged to immunise their children. \u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003eNext, children are so vulnerable and obviously they are the future of a nation. Children protection is a must so that any countries can maintain their wealth. If this immunisation program is not treated as an obligation, the well being of children is not guaranteed since not every parent has a thorough understanding as to how to provide the best condition for their children’s health.\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003eIn conclusion, I strongly recommend immunisation programs should be obligatory because of the two mentioned reasons. The first reason is children are not well protected in many poor countries. Secondly, children are the future of any nations. Having discussed that, I believe children will be protected and can have great experiences in their childhood if that program is implemented probably.\u003c/p\u003e\n","created_at":"2011-08-12T10:36:30.000Z","author_name":"Bob","tag_groups":[],"slug":null,"parent_id":2111,"visits":0,"likes":-1,"image":null},{"id":2113,"title":null,"advertisement_flag":false,"author_id":1,"content":"\n\u003cp\u003e\u003cb\u003e\u003ci\u003eOutline\u003c/i\u003e\u003c/b\u003e\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003e+Immunisation programs must be enforced\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cblockquote\u003e\n\u003cp\u003epoor health care systems\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003echildren are so vulnerable and obviously they are the future of a nation\u003c/p\u003e\n\u003c/blockquote\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003eIn conclusion, I strongly recommend immunisation programs should be obligatory\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003e\u003cb\u003e\u003ci\u003eCritique\u003c/i\u003e\u003c/b\u003e\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003e+TASK ACHIEVEMENT\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003eYou were able to achieve the task by showing your viewpoint whether children immunisation should be enforced.\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003e+LEXICAL RESOURCE\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003eVocabulary is varied: treated properly, infected, alarmingly, vulnerable. \u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003e+COHERENCE AND COHESION\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003eThere are a number of transition words used: hence, first of all, next, secondly, having discussed that.\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003eThe organization is clear and logical. If the writer can add one more paragraph giving one more reason as to why the immunisation should be enforced, it would be better because there would be 5 paragraphs.\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003e+GRAMMATICAL RANGE AND ACCURACY\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cblockquote\u003e\n\u003cp\u003echange \"condition\" to \"conditions\"\u003c/p\u003e\n\u003c/blockquote\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003efrom \"how to provide the best \u003cb\u003econdition\u003c/b\u003e for their children’s health\" to \"how to provide the best \u003cb\u003econditions\u003c/b\u003e for their children’s health\"\u003c/p\u003e\n","created_at":"2011-08-12T12:31:38.000Z","author_name":"Bob","tag_groups":[],"slug":null,"parent_id":2111,"visits":0,"likes":-1,"image":null},{"id":2114,"title":null,"advertisement_flag":false,"author_id":1,"content":"\n\u003cp\u003eWriting Tips:\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003e\u003ca href=\"/d/how-can-i-improve-my-writing-skills\" rel=\"nofollow\"\u003eHow To Improve Writing Skills\u003c/a\u003e\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003e\u003ca href=\"/d/what-required-ielts-writing\" rel=\"nofollow\"\u003eWhat Is Required In IELTS Writing\u003c/a\u003e\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003e\u003ca href=\"/d/tips-ielts-vocabulary-writing\" rel=\"nofollow\"\u003eTips On IELTS Vocabulary For Writing\u003c/a\u003e\u003c/p\u003e\n\n\u003cp\u003e\u003ca href=\"/d/how-your-ielts-essays-are-graded\" rel=\"nofollow\"\u003eHow Your IELTS Essays Are Graded\u003c/a\u003e\u003c/p\u003e\n","created_at":"2011-08-12T15:28:43.000Z","author_name":"Bob","tag_groups":[],"slug":null,"parent_id":2111,"visits":0,"likes":-1,"image":null}]
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